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You get to be my guinea pig for testing this critique thingy. :lol: Anyway, I love how smoothly it flows, and that I can pretty clearly see the emotion expressed by the lil' blue dude. :D It's the proper size and shape for an emote, I think, and the shading (something that I imagine would be problematic in a lot of cases with something as small as this, haha) is nice as well. The only things I see that could be improved upon include the following: Maybe it's just me, but the eyes and mouth seem a bit close together. Again, an emote doesn't have to follow any strict rules for that sort of thing - and this is different from dA's 'official' emotes anyway - but I think it would be a little more effective a couple pixels more apart. Also, while the shading is really nice, I think perhaps it would look more effective if the shading was a little off-center, like the lighting was coming slightly from the side rather than straight in front of the lil blue dude. :) This would also help the visibility of the face. Also perhaps it might look better with a slightly lighter shade of blue, since the current color makes the eyes and mouth a liiitle hard to see. But even so, overall, this is an exceptional first attempt, and worlds better than I could ever hope to do! :D I eagerly await MOAR emotes from ye 8D
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Haha, everything you said makes sense! Like you said, this is my first one, so there are of course, some mistakes.

I'll keep the eye-mouth thing in mind for next time. :nod: When I'm really zoomed in, they don't looks so close together.

But this was my first time shading. I used a tutorial that made it very simple, but I used what they showed: a straight-on lighting. On future emotes I'll try actually placing the light source and following it around. :XD:

Yes, the blue is too dark. Will be fixed next time! :ohnoes:

Thanks for the critic! :D

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